November 23, 2011

If You Were Mine

Maybe, I'm not good at writing poems. Berpikir berkali2 sewaktu mau nulis.  But, I'll try. Jadi teringat dulu sewaktu mau nulis surat cinta. Jadi senyum2 sendiri deh, hehehe Semoga berhasil (menyemangati diri sendiri).

If You Were Mine
I'd tell the world to stop spinning around, because I wanna say I love you every minute
I won't afraid to darkness, because I have my own sun
I don't need the light, because the sparks from your smile can light up the town 

If You Were Mine
I'd treat you, the way you deserve to be treated
I'd tell the world that you're my everything
My soul, my breathe, and my world

If You Were Mine
I'd find the other shooting star
to grant your wishes
If i couldn't grant it

And If You Were Mine, I'd love you 'til forever come

Hadeeh, sok romantis saya. Baiklah, semoga menang. Amin...! Puisi ini diikutsertakan pada :

21 comments:

Sadako Kenzhi mengatakan...

Hmmmmmmmh, mbak Meutiaaaaaaaaa keren pisannnnn puisine >.<

Masbro mengatakan...

Menyemangati diri sendiri itu keren lho Mbak, hehe

ferdivolutions mengatakan...

kereeenn..... :D

ningsyafitri mengatakan...

Hehehe...
Ceritanya mencoba jadi romantis nih eee...

Yaaa, kata2nya keren... :)
Semangat. semangat... :)

Ila Rizky Nidiana mengatakan...

Kereeennn.. semoga menang mba meutia.. :D

Alvian mengatakan...

if you were mine,
you will be the one who make me feel alright, warm and Smiling everyday.

if you were mine,
I will change everything to make you happy even i must suffer.

and if you were mine.
i will love you until my last breath.

Andri Edisi Terbatas mengatakan...

keren banget puisinya...suka banget :-D

Anonim mengatakan...

alvian sok jago inggris ah

Clara Canceriana mengatakan...

Hai, makasih udah ikut berpartisipasi. nama kamu sudah tercantum di list peserta. ditunggu untuk pengumumannya ya. Gudlak ^ ^

Rika Willy mengatakan...

mantabs mbak. Tapi saya bingung artinya.

btw, ada PE ER untuk mbak di blog ku ya.

Sang Cerpenis bercerita mengatakan...

keren abiss..ini pasti juara pertama deh. hehee

Reza mengatakan...

hmmmm... mesti nyari kamus dulu nih! hehehehe... moga beu meunang. saleum!

Gaphe mengatakan...

Eh, Clara Canceriana kan penulis novel dengan judul if youre mine juga kalo nggak salah. dia ngadain kontes yah?.. tapi kalo soal bikin puisi beginian, ampun deeeh nyerah ajaa.. hahaa.

selamat berjuang ya, semoga sukses!

Dwi Jo mengatakan...

saya kalau baca puisi pasti jadi gimana gitu, keren puisinya..

oh ini di ikutkan lomba to, good luck yach..

olala mengatakan...

uhuk uhuk

yudee mengatakan...

moga menang iaa...

Workshop Bisnis Online mengatakan...

berkunjung sob..salam blogger
sukses selalu yah..:)

Mila Said mengatakan...

wah hebat..hebat..
bisa juga ya lu bikin puisi.
bentar lagi kyknya bakal ngeluarin buku rangkuman puisi deh nih hehee

.:diah:. mengatakan...

uhuuyy yg ini yaa Mut?? eheemm eheemm... cuitt cuitt, klo buku aja bisa dibuat pasti puisi bisa juga duunkkk ;)

Claude C Kenni mengatakan...

Puisinya keren bangetttt...sayang gua terlambat tau soal giveawaynya...hiks (mode banci kontes : on)

Obrolan Blogger.com mengatakan...

kalimatmu begitu menyentuh
dan seandainya saja dia tahu... ya De

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